Wednesday 28 March 2012

Our Young Olympic Writers' Club

Well, the ancient one may not have been on-line much for a few months but hopefully this report will have been worth waiting for.  The past couple of months have been spent working with a wonderful group of young writers at Bolsover C.E. Junior School in Derbyshire and great fun it has been and no mistake. With any luck we shall be able to share this with the BT Storytellers site as well so that everyone can have a look at the talent these young scribes have.

There is no doubt that young people are beginning to get excited about the Olympics now that the start of the Games is only a few months away and here, in Bolsover, folk will be welcoming the flame as it passes through on June 29th.  Not surprisingly, the youngsters are most exercised about those sports in which they can take part themselves, like the equestrian and swimming competitions, but there is no doubt that the prospect of  the athletics and cycling events brings its own very special buzz. Wenlock and Mandeville have caught the imagination as well.

The youngsters all have their own expressions and their "in" words for describing the events. Many are on a big scale - "Colossal" is a great  favourite and also the crowd plays a very active role in their writing. Being a spectator is far from a passive role when world-class sport is in the offing.  Come to think of it, neither is being a writer!

Enjoy their excitement and their skill.




2012 Olympics

Ferocious the crowd,
The stunts begin, everybody wowed!

The seats are still,
But wobble as the crowd cheer
Will the Olympians have any fear?

Swimming, splish, splosh! The winners are waving
Each and every second the swimmers are bathing
1,2,3 the swimmers take off
Faster than a Olympic moth

Ready, set, go! The divers begin
Just as the swimmers stop using their fins.

The judges are deciding the winners,
Examining the photographs of the finish.

The end comes quickly
The crowd have waited patiently
The judges have decided..
The roar goes up!










Above are the Olympic rings


By OLIVIA KAY




The Games








Spectators were roaring,
Contestants were sweating.
Wenlock and Mandeville
Were dancing on the side lines.
Victory was in the air…

All the contestants were lined up like
African lions hunting down
Their unlucky prey.
The podium, with the numbers
1, 2 & 3 is craving
To be stood on.

Suddenly the crack of the
Murderer machine split the
Air and the
Sprinters were off!
The stadium was a colossal
Monster swallowing the crowd in one.
Then the commentator shouted
“The Olympics are here!”

Every single living being was watching
The Olympics,
London 2012 Olympics.  

Jude Sutton
       
    



Show jumping

As the bell rang they were off,
Approaching the first jump,
Adrenaline pumping,
Hearing the colossal cheer of the crowd
Urging the horse on,
Hoping to clear the jump

Taking off at just the right time,
Soaring through the air,
Galloping on with nothing but trust,
Carefully turning the corner,
Lights focusing on the horse and rider,
Grease washing away by sweat on the horse’s legs.

Sprinting to the upcoming double oxer,
Clearing the jump,
Carrying on trying not to knock a single pole down:
Galloping for gold!


Rebecca Turner









Cycling

Cycling around the track,
Aiming for the goal,
Trying to achieve GOLD,
Competitors against each other.      

Amazing people,
Stunts take place,
                                 The colossal cheer,                   
Of the crowd.

Around the bend,
Drifting around the corner,
Pedals spinning around rapidly,
Chains on the bike
Rattling constantly.
Stretched till destruction


Wenlock and Mandeville,
On the side lines,
Waiting for the games to finish,
Everyone gets anxious,
Who will win??

Jade Elmazi







DRESSAGE

Piggy French trotted into the arena
on Jakata
The music started to play –
Signalling the start!
Jakata went into a slow canter
around the arena
Quickly, he did a graceful, flying change
over the golden sand.
Then the beautiful horse
slowed down to a elegant trot
while Piggy grasped the rains
with a tender hand
Jakata was now going into a fast walk
while the strict judges
were watching every move.
Now the competition was almost over
as Piggy pulled Jakata to a firm halt,
and took of her navy blue hat
to end her round.  

Leah Gingell







2012 Paralympics



The Olympics are over
But the battle’s still on.  
The Paralympics are still to go.

The crowd gathers again
to see the moment.
They all have their tickets
as the games arrive,
ready for the moment
they have been waiting for -
for the Paralympics to start
at the dawn of  morning. 
The crowds are starting
to get ecstatic over the wait.      

And so the Paralympics start.
It has finally arrived.
The battle commences.  
It’s the first sport of the Paralympics.
The seats are filled with
enthusiastic people . 

The crowds are astonished
as the competitors arrive -
astonished  faces await .  

Chloe-Ann  Street

   





Olympic Swimmers

Diving in the waters deep,
swimming for the  gold,
splashing as the whistle blew,
as the crowd grew.
Back and forth they go,
100m 1000m how long will they go?
The swimmers must be
tired by now but no, off they go!
They trust themselves
just for the gold to be theirs!
The moment was nigh,
though the swimming
had only just begun
so far the race was going well:
the audience got settled in
watching swimmers go by,
cheering, hoping, having fun,
waving to the winning one.

Jessica  Fletcher








The Olympics

The stadium was filling for the Olympic Games
People getting lost in the vast area,
Poised and ready to run,
Eyes at the track
Hoping to win the gold.
The death machine shot its one and only bullet
The race had begun.

Running, sweating, hoping and, at the corner,
People gazing cheering, too,
Waving to the winning one.
The flags waved and the race ends;
Rest is what they need.
There is swimming next
Be ready, though be steady!

Standing on the platform, ready to dive
In their swimming suits.
The whistle blows and then a big SPLASH
The swimming had begun.
Diving, splashing,
Driving for the gold!
Hopes are high, heads are low,
Cheering and squinting,
Hoping and winning.

People are excited but tired
This will last long,
Having to shut their eyes or wear goggles,
They made one lap but four more to go.
Tired and bothered sweating fast
Need to stop for one last breath
Keep on swimming, swim on!
I’m waving to him,
He is the winning one!
100m left to reach
They have no time for grief
Come on! The crowd is shouting
To the lagging one, the race was ended
Too soon to be true, the only one and win..
Who will win?
Who will lose?
Who will take the prize?


Alicia Felis













Yes, it's been all go for the past eight weeks and here are a few photos of the youngsters at work as part of their Friday afternoon "Mini-university" sessions.









                                                                                                                                                                                              

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